

I actually like New Moon a lot, lmao. It was my second favorite out of all of them(Eclipse being the first), and whenever I "re-read" new moon, really that just means me skipping the part when she gets the bike idea and then reading through until she is leaving to save edward.lenoreonel wrote:Am I the only one who increasingly annoyed at this book? I mean REALLY. Let's start with the break-up.
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Okay, so leaving out the six pages of Bella describing herself charging the crowd, let's skip right to encountering Edward. Sooo we run into Edward, and he's missing his shirt. Now, instead of putting it back on when Jane, Cais, and, I believe it was Marcus (him or Aro, I don't remember), Edward stays shirtless until... well he stays shirtless the whole time.What happened to his shirt, anyway? I digress. What really got on my nerves was that they forgave each other right away. It seems like Edward didn't even remember why he left in the first place! Everything goes back to happily ever after as soon as they see each other. Sorry, it doesn't make sense to me.
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melodycullen wrote:Oh, i mostly agree with you...
I will argue that the blank month pages were one of the best literary techniques i've ever seen in a book. What a better way to convey the emptyness that Bella felt...and thats what it was. It wasn't the rest of the world's view of her during that time, it was Bella's view. If Charlie or Angela wrote a book about this time period there would be no blank pages. SM said more in 5 pages with 1 word on them then she could have if she had written 5 chapters full of Bella wandering around school. Much better than writing ..."the next 5 months passed like a *some brilliant metaphor here*".
The rest of it...yeah...Edward brought his relationship problems on himself when he left. Thats why I have no issue with Jacob's feelings towards Bella...Edward left her. What did he think she'd do? More blank pages? Nope...someone was going to pull her out of it. Who better than a hot guy?
The rest of all the shirtless Edward stuff can be applied to the fact that SM wrote the books for her target audience...teenage girls.
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